First time japan - itinerary

Hi

Please help with my itinerary as i am confused with order

option 1
land in haneda on 14th april - 10:30 PM stay in haneda for night
15th april - activate JR pass and go to kyoto
spend 15 , 16 ,17 and 18 night in kyoto this will include day trip to nara
19 - go to hiroshima and then onto miyajima . Stay in miyajima
20 - miyajima to himeji and then to tokyo
21 , 22 , and 23 day in tokyo
fly back 23 night from haneda

option 2
opposite of above i.e start in tokyo and then kyoto and then miyajima and return to tokyo on last day

any suggestions will be greatly appreciated

If you can carry on with a jetlag that will be fine. You can even fly from HND to Hiroshima then traverse back to Tokyo by train or when in Hiroshima fly back to HND.