One month Japan Itinerary?

Hi,

I will be traveling to Japan for one month in January. I already did a lot of research about the most beautiful things I want to see, but I also want to relax - enjoy Japanese living and don't have to rush all the time to get from one place to another.

So this is my itinerary so far. Any ideas? Things I better change/forgot? I thought I'd get the Japan Rail Pass for 14 days (the days where I travel the most) - would it be convenient or better to take 21 days?

Thanks for your help!

1 january Tokyo Arrival
2 january Tokyo
3 january Tokyo
4 january Tokyo
5 january Tokyo Daytrip Kamakura
6 january Tokyo Daytrip Kobe
7 january Tokyo to Hakone
8 january Hakone
9 january Hakone to Nagano
10 january Nagano (Snow Monkeys)
11 january Nagano to Osaka
12 january Osaka
13 january Osaka Daytrip Kobe
14 january Osaka Daytrip Tokushima
15 january Osaka Daytrip Nishihama Sea
16 january Osaka to Koyasan
17 january Koyasan
18 january Koyasan to Kyoto
19 january Kyoto Daytrip Nara
20 january Kyoto
21 january Kyoto
22 january Kyoto
23 january Kyoto
24 january Kyoto
25 january Kyoto to Hiroshima
26 january Hiroshima
27 january Hiroshima to Tokyo
28 january Tokyo
29 january Tokyo
30 january Tokyo
31 january Tokyo
1 february Tokyo Departure

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This looks better, right? :-)

18 january Koyasan to Naoshima
19 january Naoshima
20 january Naoshima to Kagoshima
21 january Kagoshima Nature
22 january Kagoshima Beach
23 january Kagoshima to Hiroshima
24 january Hiroshima
25 january Hiroshima to Kyoto
26 january Kyoto
27 january Kyoto
28 january Kyoto
29 january Kyoto
30 january Tokyo
31 january Tokyo
1 february Tokyo Departure

Jan 6, Tokyo to Kobe day trip: There must be a typo or something - day trip to Kobe from Tokyo is not feasible.

Yes, correct it should be Nikko!

Nishihana is in Okinawa isn't it?

I'd agree with above. I'd add in some Kyushu/Kagoshima/Miyasaki is into topical beaches. You could drop a day or two from both Tokyo and Kyoto to make it work.