travel itinerary

I know this is a usual FAQ but thought that I may as well jump on the band wagon and ask for some feedback on my proposed itinerary and any suggestions on where I should go/see.

So here we go this is the plan so far:-

fly into Osaka 9th Nov-travel straight to Kyoto for 4 nights;-

Travel down to Hiroshima and spend 3 night. visit the Peace Park and a day trip to Miyajima.

Travel up to and stay in Shizuoka City for 3 nights

The final leg of th trip will be 4 nights in Tokyo.

Travel back by Shinkansen on the 24th Nov to Osaka for the return flight to the UK.

the locations are already booked and we will have JR passes, but we are now trying to fill in some details regarding things to see and do.

So for what we have seen and think we should go to include:

Kyoto
- Nara
- Imperial palace
- Unesco Temples/Castle/Shrines
- Tetsugaku-no-michi
- Zoo

Hiroshima
- Peace Park/A-bomb dome
- Miyajima
- Art museum
- Manga Library
- Baseball game

Shizuoka
- Takayama
- Mt Fuji
- (visit family)

Tokyo
- Edo castle
- Tokyo museum
- shopping
- Tsukiji ichiba
- Meiji-jinga

What are your thoughts on the duration/quality of these trips/locations. Any other suggestions are greatly appreciated especially evening/night activities after all the tourist stuff has closed?

Thank you all for your time and input

One comment about "baseball game." I think professional tournament is highly likely to be over when you are in Hiroshima.