Booking a hostel by fax

Hi, a couple of the places I want to stay in for my up coming trip only have fax numbers, so, I was thinking of writing in both English and Japanese to lower the chance of misunderstanding - but am not certain on my Japanese

"まず、日本語がよく出来なくて、垂ｵ訳ありません。
ホステルでベッド一つを８月２８日から８月３１日まで三泊蘭�したいです。"

How does this look?

Thanks in advance,
Adam

まず、日本語がよく出来なくて、垂ｵ訳ありません。
ホステルでベッド一つ（男性）を８月２８日（チェックイン）から８月３１日（チェックアウト）で三泊蘭�したいです。
蘭�できるかどうか、おりかえしご連絡下さい。
ファックスなら：(your fax number)
メールなら： (your e-mail address)
です。よろしくお願いします。

I added "for male" after "one bed" (in case if's a complete dorm style) and "check-in" and "check-out" after the dates to be clear.
Also added the third line, "please reply if this reservation is possible."
Fourth line "If you want to contac me by fax: (state your fax number)"
Fifth line: "If via e-mail: (state your e-mail)"

For the rest of it, watch out for the time difference :)

Thanks very much for your help, AK.