Translation Hotel Reservation Question

Hi,

I want to email the hotel and find out when I can start making reservation for December this year (December 2024). Would the wordings below work / make sense?

Thank you for your review and feedback.

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こんにちは。

あなたの一日がうまくいきますように。

失礼します。予約についてお尋ねします。

今年の12月の宿泊予約はいつからできますか？

よろしくお願いします。
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You can replace:
あなたの一日がうまくいきますように。
失礼します。

with:
すみません、

Thank you for the review and suggestion!
-Bella

Actually, you might want to send it as is, so that they'd know you're not a native Japanese speaker. Then they could reply in plain textbook sentences. Or you could attach an English version of your question.

Just to add to the above comment, as to why you're better off without 「あなたの一日がうまくいきますように。」, though it translates more or less to "I hope you are having a good day," in practice it has a more personal/dramatic tone than that phrase does in English. In Japanese, it ends up sounding closer to "I hope that you will be successful this day," so if someone said 「あなたの一日がうまくいきますように」to me out of the blue, I'd probably react with "What? Oh, no, I don't have anything particularly difficult or crucial planned today, so don't worry about me."

Thank you everyone for the input and knowledge! どうもありがとうございます!